What I Plan to Read Next

I just finished my book Divergent and I really liked it.  Next I plan to read the second book in the series called Insurgent.  One of the reasons I want to keep reading is because the ending was very suspenseful and the book leaves the reader waiting to know what happens next.  I want to keep reading because I really want to find out what happens next.  I also want to see how the characters and the people in the society react to the events that just happened, but I'm not going to spoil what it is.  After Insurgent there is a third book called Allegiant, which I might read if the second book is even better than the first.  But I will have to read these books in the fall because to tell you the truth, I don't read over the summer except if it's for school.

The Divergent series.

Final Blogging Assessment in English 1B

Text Connections

A text-to-self connection for my book Divergent is that sometimes I feel like there is someone controlling me and not allowing me to think on my own. This is like my book because the government in my book wants you to think a certain way to be able to be controlled. But Divergents don't think one way and that is why they are so difficult to control.

A text-to-text connection for my book is to Fahrenheit 451. My book connects to Fahrenheit 451 because in the book, the government hankers to control the people and make sure that nobody can learn from books in dismay that the people might take on the government. That is why they burn the books, to prevent the people from gaining knowledge of the past and revolting against the government. A quote from my book that supports this is when Tris and her mother are talking, "But our minds move in a dozen different directions. We can't be confined to one way of thinking, and that terrifies our leaders. It means we can't be controlled"(Roth pg. 442) Governments in both societies want the people to think a certain way so they can be manipulated and controlled by the government.


A text-to-world connection for my book is that in today's day and age, the government feels like a major presence in our society. Every month you hear reports on the news about how the government is being incriminated of spying or listening in on people's conversations. The technology is available that the government could be able to eavesdrop on any one's conversations. The government can use technology like this to control and manage the people. The government claims that they use this type of technology to prevent terrorist plots or other tragedies from happening. But most people feel like they are violating their privacy. This is like my book because in the book, the Erudite have created a serum with transmitters to take control over the Dauntless soldiers to kill the Abnegation people.

I myself am against this idea of the government spying on the people for many reasons for example privacy! Hello? Does really anyone want the government watching and listening to them 24/7? No! How do you, the reader, feel about this issue in our society today? Comment your opinion.

A picture of a sign saying the Government is watching people

A cartoon sketch of the government spying on the people.

Here is a link to the 'New York Times' website article talking about this issue.
http://bits.blogs.nytimes.com/2014/03/13/facebooks-zuckerberg-complains-to-obama-over-government-spying/?_php=true&_type=blogs&_r=0

Paragraph 1:  Throughout the trimester I have tried to include different styles of syntax and diction in my blog posts.  But in my final post I included a few different examples of syntax and diction.  One example of formal/ elevated diction from my post is in the text-to-self paragraph when I write, “My book connects to Fahrenheit 451 because in the book, the government hankers to control the people and make sure that nobody can learn from books in dismay that the people might take on the government.”  To make the sentence more elegant or formal I replaced simple words like want and fear with words like hankers and dismay.  These words show a little bit of my voice in the piece and make the piece more formal.  An example of syntax in my post is a mix of punctuation and short sentences at the end when I write, “I myself am against this idea of the government spying on the people for many reasons for example privacy! Hello? Does really anyone want the government watching and listening to them 24/7? No! How do you, the reader, feel about this issue in our society today?”  I feel like the short sentences and the different punctuations help show my voice in the paragraph.  It also connects with the audience by asking questions and voicing my own opinion.  These styles of both syntax and diction help me show my voice in the post.

Paragraph 2: My goal this trimester was to actively engage the reader, contain compelling ideas, take advantage of technology’s capacity to link to other information and to display information flexibly and dynamically by consistently including links, pictures.  First trimester when I blogged I really didn’t fulfill any of my goals above.  That is why over the course of this trimester I have tried to work toward this goal.  A few ways I have worked toward this goal was that in my first post and a few others I incorporated links to website discussing a topic or relating to my book.  For example one link was to a faction quiz for my book while another was linked to an article discussing government spying on the people.  Another way I have worked toward my goal of actively engaging the reader with compelling ideas is by asking questions for the reader to think about and answer.  This keeps the reader attentive and pays attention to what I wrote in a post so that they can answer it.  I also give my opinion on a topic and that allows room for a debate in the comments section.  In conclusion throughout the trimester and especially throughout the year I have worked to improve the content an quality in my blog using techniques I have learned this year and in previous years.

Text Connections

  A text-to-self connection for my book Divergent is that sometimes I feel like there is someone controlling me and not allowing me to think on my own.  This is like my book because the government in my book wants you to think a certain way to be able to be controlled.  But Divergents don't think one way and that is why they are so difficult to control.

  A text-to-text connection for my book is to Fahrenheit 451.  My book connects to Fahrenheit 451 because in the book, the government hankers to control the people and make sure that nobody can learn from books in dismay that the people might take on the government.  That is why they burn the books, to prevent the people from gaining knowledge of the past and revolting against the government.  A quote from my book that supports this is when Tris and her mother are talking, "But our minds move in a dozen different directions.  We can't be confined to one way of thinking, and that terrifies our leaders.  It means we can't be controlled"(Roth pg. 442)  Governments in both societies want the people to think a certain way so they can be manipulated and controlled by the government.


  A text-to-world connection for my book is that in today's day and age, the government feels like a major presence in our society.  Every month you hear reports on the news about how the government is being incriminated of spying or listening in on people's conversations.  The technology is available that the government could be able to eavesdrop on any one's conversations.  The government can use technology like this to control and manage the people.  The government claims that they use this type of technology to prevent terrorist plots or other tragedies from happening.  But  most people feel like they are violating their privacy.  This is like my book because in the book, the Erudite have created a serum with transmitters to take control over the Dauntless soldiers to kill the Abnegation people.

I myself am against this idea of the government spying on the people for many reasons for example privacy!  Hello?  Does really anyone want the government watching and listening to them 24/7?  No!How do you, the reader, feel about this issue in our society today?  Comment your opinion.

A picture of a sign saying the Government is watching people.

A cartoon sketch of the government spying on the people.

Here is a link to the 'New York Times' website article talking about this issue.
http://bits.blogs.nytimes.com/2014/03/13/facebooks-zuckerberg-complains-to-obama-over-government-spying/?_php=true&_type=blogs&_r=0

Letter to the Author

  If I wrote a letter to the author of my book Veronica Roth, I would tell her my thoughts and opinions.  The letter would be written similar to the one below.

Dear Veronica Roth,

  Hi, my name is Nate Berman, I am a freshman at Mason High School and I am currently your book "Divergent."  I am almost finished with the book and I really like it.  I like how you have created this futuristic dystopian society that is split up into 5 factions but I do want to know why and what happened to make this society this way.  I also like how you keep the reader such as myself guessing by incorporating lots of suspenseful parts to the story and using some elevated diction throughout the story for example on page 357 when Tris thinks, "My stomach twinges at the thought of him."(Roth pg. 357)  This diction makes the reader be able to picture her stomach twinging and there is more sentences like this throughout the story.  Something I don't like about the book is that you only focus on Tris and you don't show the reader what life in the other factions is like.

  Overall I really like the book and all of the plot twists the most.  I am definitely going to try and read the other books in the series.

                                      Sincerely, Nate Berman

Veronica Roth and the cover of the book.

The Best/ Worst Things About My Book

  So I am almost done with my book and I want to share some reasons about the best things of my book.  First my favorite reason is that there is a very good and easy to follow story line.  There isn't any flashbacks that would confuse me and it is a very smooth and steady plot.  Another reason I love this book is that the plot is very suspenseful and it makes me want to keep reading to find out more.  Another reason is the setting.  The setting is in a dystopian future that has the people split up into 5 different factions.  Before I bought the book I read the summary and I was immediately drawn in because it sounded interesting, the plot seemed good and the setting is in a dystopian future.

  Now some of the worst things about my book are.  One thing is that it mainly only focuses on Tris,  the reader doesn't get to follow any of the other character who chose different factions.  I would like to know how other people are doing during their initiations.  Another thing is that the reader is not given a lot of information about how the world changed and the government creating factions.  Overall I love my book and highly recommend it if you want an action, suspenseful and thrilling book.

My book "Divergent" different factions.

Character Symbols and Animals

  A symbol that would represent the main character Tris would be a chimpanzee.  Chimps are very unpredictable, strong and intelligent like Tris is in the book.  Tris might appear small and weak but she is smart and knows how to fight.  She can be unpredictable in the way she fights whether she ruthlessly destroys her opponent without mercy or fights her enemies physiologically.  A chimp is not very big but they are very intelligent and they are incredibly strong and have the ability to rip your limbs off over your body and this is why they are so unpredictable like Tris.

  A symbol that would represent Four is a lion.  Lions are the kings of the jungles and are leaders, strong, vicious and also unpredictable like Four.  Four is one of the instructors over seeing the training of the initiates.  Four is leader and mentor to the initiates, he is also strong and can be vicious if he is in a fight, like when Tris was being beat up he came in and beat up the attackers.  Lion's are also big and are leaders to other lions just like Four.

Tris is like a chimp.

Four is like a lion.

Krista Ramsey Introduction Activity

http://www.cincinnati.com/story/opinion/columnists/krista-ramsey/2014/03/15/krista-ramsey-third-grade-reading-guarantee/6475723/

My article is about a 3rd grade teacher Jeni Ernsthausen who wants to help her students pass the OAA.  She doesn't want to be bore them with too much reading and writing but wants to get kids to like to read and be ready for the next grade and even in a job one day.

The line I think is best written is, "It has taken two years of legislating and countless hours of hammering out rules and time lines, but Ohio’s Third Grade Reading Guarantee is fully in place this year."(Ramsey)  The impact of this quote on the reader is that the reader feels like this is a very fancy and important sentence because Ramsey uses elegant diction like 'legislating' and 'hammering'.  The use of these words makes the reader picture Ernsthausen almost literally hammering time lines and knowledge into her student's heads.  The sentence is also a good form of elegant syntax.

Krista Ramsey's writing style is a elaborate and well organized style.  An example of this from the article above is, "She also has a very good handle on something the state’s not measuring at all: not just if her students can read, but if they will read." (Ramsey)

Some questions I have for Ramsey are:

1: Where do you go or what do you see to get ideas to write about?
2: What kind of education did you receive and where did you go to college?
3: Would you have ever considered being a writing teacher or language arts teacher?